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  • #61
    Yeah yeah the thread is a bit old, but I want to share too.

    To You

    This has been driving me crazy
    All of the small talk is a waste
    A chuckle here,
    A smile there,
    It's getting us nowhere.

    I took the time to think about us
    And came to no conclusion
    The fuel is here,
    The spark is there,
    The fire is nowhere.

    What else is there to do,
    For me to prove myself to you?
    How would you react,
    If I kissed you?
    How would you respond,
    If I said 'I love you'?
    For me you are everything I need,
    But what am I to you?


    Fallen
    Palms sweating,
    Hands shaking,
    Knees weakening,
    Stomach turning,
    Arms shaking,
    Eyes wandering,
    Heart sputtering,
    What has happened to me?
    Have I fallen from grace?

    My thoughts are all focused now,
    All crammed into an already full mind.
    Yet none of my thoughts help,
    For all has been lost before now.
    What is keeping me from falling out of control?

    The last thread has been pulled from the spool,
    Is it enough to make me whole
    Or will I come undone instead?
    No, I cannot,
    As I have fallen for her
    And there is no turning back now.
    The song doesn't make your hands clap,
    The hand claps make the song

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    • #62
      Well shit, I've been all sorts of busy these last three weeks or so, and I forgot about this thread. There's assloads of stuff for me to read, so give me a day or two and I'll post some of my thoughts on the various pieces you guys have tossed up.

      Thanks for keeping this thread alive. Keep on sharing your work!
      jasonofabitch loves!!!!

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      • #63
        my treasure

        Safe smooth case
        Its top spins again
        Push down hard, now turn
        Fingertips grip plastic edges with plastic ridges
        It makes a grating sound
        Like steel beads on wood
        Finally freedom

        Sanitary smell and puffed cotton
        Pull the cotton out
        That creepy slippery touch of
        Fibrous material sliding
        Between forefinger and thumb
        It makes no sound, but it still squeaks
        Look inside

        Round red rubies
        Diamond white lozenges
        Little, yellow, different
        Blue, translucent, and plastic
        They all spill onto skin
        Some skitter onto the floor
        Lost in pink bathroom carpets

        Swallow
        Bitter like soap they slide
        Over spit-soaked tongue
        And down the throat
        A sip of sink water follows
        To chase, not cleanse the taste

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        • #64
          tether

          Glowing white faces with spinning black hands
          Hands always ready to pull in the reins
          How quickly slip away these endless sands

          We find ourselves servant to their every command
          We are held in their bondage by the strongest chains
          Glowing white faces with spinning black hands

          Forever we're bowing to constant demands
          Finally fragmenting under the strain
          How quickly slip away these endless sands

          Needlessly greedy, they gather our strands
          Pulling them out, ruining the skein
          Glowing white faces with spinning black hands

          We could wander forever in these immense lands
          But in one lonely desert we are contained
          How quickly slip away these endless sands

          The world around us beautifully expands
          Our course in it is a thinning dead vein
          Glaring white faces with horrid black hands
          How quickly slip away these empty sands

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          • #65
            Simplistic expedition through the foreign world of art
            Recognizing only shades and shapes familiar from the start

            Passing fluxuations in the swirling vortex wall
            Rapid pacing 'gainst the floorboards to ease the fear you'll fall

            Attempting to forget that which the eyes just scanned
            Continuously narrowing down the area that is panned

            Scraping dully, blankly, always passé through air current dim and still
            Feasting always on emptiness for it provides a numbing fill

            Pass to bypass
            Forged to forget
            Sliding down corridor
            Now dimly lit

            What exits, leaves, but never dissapears
            Forever manifests inside subconscious fears

            Misshapen lark
            Through perception park
            Blanketed in personal dark
            Contrast fast eroding
            Diluted tears aboding
            What may have once been stark

            Gazing neither up nor down
            Solely straight ahead
            Roots submerged
            And raindrops bled
            Boots perturbed
            And substance fled

            Faster pacing down the hall
            Colors dissipate and fade from wall

            Distinction blurs
            Disagreement concurs
            Blindly the mosaic stirs

            Faster still the past does pass
            Floorboards murdered the last of grass

            Whirling in every direction that faces straight ahead
            Mobility of neck lost in evolution of bread
            Cascading down slopes with no thoughts of backtracking sled

            Eyes locked in position
            Create your condition
            Personal superstition
            Shooting self with own ammunition

            Roots decay
            Soil washes away
            Floorboards levitate over the once glowing day

            Morning of mourning adorning remnants of fire
            Extinguished- cold embers, the dieing is dire

            Now racing, not pacing- colors morph black
            Remaining piece/peace of mind shattered
            There's no turning back

            Greed, ignorance, and the communal superiority complex of the human race
            Clutching metal braces as we race to disgrace
            As the pollution wipes clear all expression, all face

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            • #66
              Plastered to an upright wall
              Terrified to downwards fall
              Pastel-white contrast black night
              Starving differential unto blind-sight

              Imperceivable shackles
              Unnoticed chains
              Hopefulness cackles
              Acid rains

              To shrug off epiphany, to freedom soar
              Blast past through the wall
              Chalk outlined door

              Satirical starvation
              Illiterate liberation
              As inquisitiveness devours identification
              Impenetrable ghosts portray reincarnation

              Glittering, yet wholly transparent dust
              Indivisible greed, founded in lust
              In only falsehood is cherished trust

              Sentimental value buried within
              Draped only under moral sin
              Smoldering tar-pits composed of dry skin

              Buoyancy lost amongst lapsing water
              Son is but father, and mother-daughter
              Always proudly marching to slaughter

              Distant truth forgotten high on a rafter
              Forever droned out by insidious laughter

              Greed, ignorance, and the communal superiority complex of the human race
              Clutching metal braces as we race to disgrace
              As the pollution wipes clear all expression, all face

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              • #67
                Dancing gracefully on broadway in a bright pink pleated tutu.
                After several more months of instant dinner and lunch I can upgrade to a silvery moomoo.
                Hailing promotion of my fat ass-cheeks in motion, swimming fluently through ten layers of lotion
                Gouging the earth with my immense bloated worth, hyperextending my tongue and consuming the ocean

                Clouding out the stars with greed, speed and gas-guzzling cars
                Spearing the landscape with hollowness and shallow metal bars
                Vaguely tinting the reflection so lost hope stares me back
                Consuming more disillusioned equations to make up for what I sorely lack

                Bleeding profusely the substance that is none, reflexively clotting the blood is a misintentional pun
                Broiling and bubbling at the barrel of a loaded gun, ignorance and fluorescent lights are my cherished and newfound of old sun
                I play the worn deck of cards of invariance; it lacks aces and jacks, filled with systematical sense
                I bask in the glimmering glow of my diluted future only manifesting as a contorted extension of past-tense

                Greed, ignorance, and the communal superiority complex of the human race
                Clutching metal braces as we race to disgrace
                As the pollution wipes clear all expression, all face

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