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USS Banana after years of superior jav play has amassed 17999 kills, he is 1 kill away from 18k, Type ?go Javs FOR A GAME OF HUNT (no scorereset) -Kim
---A few minutes later---
9:cool koen> you scorereseted
9:Kim> UM
9:Kim> i didn't
9:cool koen> hahahahahahaha
9:ph <ZH>> LOOOOL
9:Stargazer <ER>> WHO FUCKING SCORERESET
9:pascone> lol?
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Can a riddle physically get up and move itself as we can? No.
Here is a revision since we have to use alliteration(repetition of beginning consonant sounds exp: grimly the gruesome monster gored the man(see lots of g's(only need 2))) and only 8-12 syllables per line.
While this word-puzzle may seem puzzling,
You cannot give up on this complex question.
I am full of frustrating and cryptic clues.
I may be toilsome to understand,
But can you solve of guess me in good time?
I cannot move on my own, there is no way.
I am not living, I do not breathe.
Devilishly clever I can be.
To understand me, you must look above.
Hopefully I havent mislead you.
see, some words were switched or moved, depending on syllables + alliteratin.
See any problems with it?
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Personally I think "I cannot move on my own, there is no way" is a pretty pointless and crappy line.
I'd write "I cannot think on my own" which would make it more intriguing because then you have to ask yourself what could be devilishly clever but can't think?
You also wrote "of" instead of "or"
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Originally posted by Sleepy WeaselI'd write "I cannot think on my own" which would make it more intriguing because then you have to ask yourself what could be devilishly clever but can't think?
I cannot think, but you shall soon.
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What's my prize for getting it?USS Banana after years of superior jav play has amassed 17999 kills, he is 1 kill away from 18k, Type ?go Javs FOR A GAME OF HUNT (no scorereset) -Kim
---A few minutes later---
9:cool koen> you scorereseted
9:Kim> UM
9:Kim> i didn't
9:cool koen> hahahahahahaha
9:ph <ZH>> LOOOOL
9:Stargazer <ER>> WHO FUCKING SCORERESET
9:pascone> lol?
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