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    ROSE FINALE
    FINAL SEGMENT: “NOW IT ENDS”
    PT. 1

    ROSE LEE SITS IN A LARGE OVERSIZED CHAIR CHECKING AND CLEANING HER GUNS AND KNIFE. AFTER CHECKING THE BLADES SHARPNESS BY SLICING HER FINGER BY LIGHTLY MOVING IT DOWN THE LENGTH AND MAKING SURE SHE HAS A FULL CLIP IN EACH GUN SHE HOLSTERS THE GUN, PLACES THE KNIFE IN A LEATHER LINED POCKET ON HER HIP AND LOOKS AROUND. TO HER LEFT SHE SEES A LARGE BAR SPANNING MOST OF THE WALL. JOHN AND A FEW OTHERS SEEM TO BE HAVING A DRINKING CONTEST. ONE MAN LIES PASSED OUT ON THE FLOOR AND AN OTHER IS THROWING UP IN A NEARBY PLANTER. TO HER RIGHT ARE SEVERAL SMALL CARD TABLES. ALL AROUND THE ROOM PEOPLE ARE SMOKING AND DRINKING AMONGST THEMSELVES. SHE SITS IN THE BACK CORNER SO SHE CAN SEE EVERYTHING, SHE ALWAYS HAS. SHE LOOKS AT THE DOOR ENTERING THE ROOM AND AT THE CLOCK ABOVE IT, 1213 HOURS.

    HER CELL PHONE RINGS AND SHE COVERS HER LEFT EAR SO SHE CAN HEAR THE PHONE BETTER AS SHE TALKS. AFTER A BRIEF CONVERSATION SHE GULPS HER GLASS OF “BLACK NIGHT”(HER OWN CONCOCTION WITH A TASTE BETWEEN SAKE AND STOUT, ALMOST 85% ALCOHOL CONTENT, AND A VERY DARK APPEARANCE) AND, BLOWING HER LONG DARK BROWN HAIR OUT OF HER FACE, LEAVES THE ROOM.

    SHE WALKS DOWN THE ALL TOO FAMILIAR HALLS AND RECALLS ALL THAT HAS HAPPENED IN THE LAST THIRTEEN YEARS. THE BARE CEMENT WALLS ARE RIDDLED WITH BULLET HOLES AND SIGNS OF THE EXPLOSIONS OF GRENADES AND ROCKETS. PIECES OF CEMENT ON THE FLOOR AND BLOODSTAINS ON THE WALLS DO LITTLE TO EASE HER TENSIONS. THE GLASS HAS BEEN BLOWN OUT OF THE WINDOWS HIGH ON THE RIGHT WALL AND THE STEEL DOORS TO HER LEFT SEEM TO SCREAM OF THE HORRORS THAT OCCURRED BEHIND THEM. ROSE LEE KNOWS MUCH OF THOSE HORRORS; SHE COMMITTED MANY OF THEM. THE WINDOWS HAVE BEEN BOARDED UP AND SEVERAL OF THE METAL BARS ACROSS THEM HAD BEEN CUT. SHE STOPS OUTSIDE ONE OF THE DOORS AND POPS HER NECK BEFORE REMOVING AN OLD PIECE OF WHITE CLOTH STAINED WITH BLOOD BEFORE ENTERING.

    SHE WALKS INTO A SMALL ROOM WITH BARE CEMENT WALLS AND A SINGLE LIGHT HANGING FROM THE CEILING. A MAN SITS HANDCUFFED TO A CHAIR AT A SMALL TABLE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE ROOM BENEATH THE LIGHT. THE OTHER MAN AND THE GUARDS BESIDE THE DOOR LEAVE AND ROSE LEE SMILES SADISTICALLY BEFORE REMOVING HER GUN AND TOSSING IT ON THE TABLE. SHE PUNCHES THE MAN IN THE STOMACH AND BEGINS THE INQUIRY.

    “SO, I HEARD YOU’VE AN IRON WILL. WELL, WE’LL SEE WHAT WE CAN DO ABOUT THAT”. SHE HEATS UP HER KNIFE WITH A SMALL GAS TORCH ON THE TABLE AND CUTS THE MANS LEFT CHEEK WITH IT SLOWLY. “OW, DOES THAT HURT?” SHE ASKS JOKINGLY.

    THE MANS SCREAMS ECHO THROUGH THE HALLS AS THE SOUNDS OF SHATTERING BONES AND SEVERAL GUNSHOTS FILL THE AIR AS SHE RELENTLESSLY POUNDS THE MAN. THIS WAS THE WAY SHE QUESTIONED PRISONERS WHO WOULDN’T TALK. ABOUT THIRTY MINUTES AFTER IT BEGINS SHE LEAVES THE ROOM WIPING BLOOD OFF HER KNUCKLES AND SMILING IN A WAY THAT MADE THE MEN OUTSIDE SHIVER IN FEAR.

    “HE SHOULD TALK NOW, WHEN HE COMES TO”, SHE PUTS THE CLOTH BACK IN HER POCKET AND LEAVES DOWN THE HALL.

    THE THREE MEN LOOK INSIDE AND SOON WISH THEY HADN’T. THE MANS RIGHT ARM IS BROKEN AND SHE HAS SHOT HIM IN BOTH KNEES. HIS NOSE IS BROKEN AND HE IS BLEEDING ALL OVER. THEY PICK HIM UP AND TAKE HIM TO HIS CELL.

    MEANWHILE

    JOHN PUTS DOWN HIS DRINK AND HEADS TO HIS QUARTERS. HE ENTERS THE SMALL ROOM AND PLOPS ONTO HIS BED. HE PUTS HIS “DISTURBED” CD IN THE PLAYER AND QUICKLY DRIFTS OFF TO SLEEP. SHORTLY AFTER HE HEARS SOMEONE AT THE DOOR.

    “WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT?” THERE ARE THREE MEN IN COMBAT GEAR OUT SIDE THE DOOR.

    “WE JUST GOT WORD THE BANKS GOT A SHIPMENT COMIN’ IN A FEW HOURS AND THOUGHT YOU MIGHT WANT TO ATTEND.” ANSWERS ONE MAN

    “YEAH, JUST A MOMENT WHILE I GET READY. HEY, WHY DON’T YOU SEE IF ROSE LEE WANTS TO GO?”

    “SURE WILL.” REPLIES AN OTHER MAN.

    THE MEN ARRIVE AT ROSE LEES DOOR AND BEGIN BANGING ON THE DOOR. SHE WAS KNOWN FOR SLEEPING THROUGH JUST ABOUT ANYTHING AT TIMES.

    “WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT?” SHE ANSWERS HALF ASLEEP AND NUDE. WHEN ONE OF THE MEN CONTINUES TO STARE SHE KICKS HIM IN THE GROIN AND KNEES HIM N THE FACE. “SO, WHAT DO YOU WANT?”

    ONE OF THE MEN FINALLY ANSWERS “WE’RE HITTING A BANK VAN AND WANTED TO KNOW IF YOU WANT IN. JOHN’S ALREADY WAITING FOR US IN THE HANGER.”

    “YEAH, SURE I’LL BE THERE IN A MINUTE OF THIRTY.”


    LATER, IN THE HANGER

    ROSE LEE ARRIVES WEARING HER CLASS II ARMOR AND CARRYING A DUFFLE BAG FULL OF GUNS AND AMMO. SHE AND JOHN EACH TAKE A BLACK MOTORCYCLE AND THE OTHER THREE MEN TAKE A VAN. THE ONE SHE HAD KNEED IN THE FACE WEARS A BANDAGE ON HIS BROKEN NOSE.

    HALFWAY TO THE TARGET ROSE LEE TAKES A SIDE ROUTE AND SEES A COP CHASING HER. SHE JUMPS OFF A FEW STEEP ROADS BUT THE POLICE CRUISER CATCHES UP AGAIN AND AGAIN. SOON A FEW MORE OFFICERS JOIN IN AND ROSE LEE DECIDES SHE’LL HAVE TO TAKE THEM OUT. SHE STOPS HER BIKE AND THROWS A FEW FOUR PRONGED CALTROPS BEFORE TAKING OFF AGAIN. TWO SQUAD CARS GO OVER THE CALTROPS AND CRASH AS THEIR TIRES BURST OPEN. ONE OFFICER PUTS AN AK-M OUT THE WINDOW AND FIRES. ROSE LEE PULLS BEHIND A BUILDING AFTER ONE OF THE BULLETS HITS HER BODY ARMOR. SHE OPENS HER DUFFLE BAG AND QUICKLY ASSEMBLES A SMALL ROCKET LAUNCHER. AS THE FIRST CAR TURNS THE CORNER, SHE FIRES AND TAKES OFF IN THE OTHER DIRECTION. THE CAR EXPLODES AND ONE OTHER STOPS TO HELP THE TRAPPED OFFICER.

    THE REMAINING THREE CARS CONTINUE THE CHASE AS THE OFFICERS EMPTY CLIP AFTER CLIP ATTEMPTING THE STOP ROSE LEE. ONE OF THE BULLETS HITS HER REAR TIRE AND SHE BAILS OUT AS THE BIKE CRASHES THRU A SHOP WINDOW. SHE EMPTIES HER AK-M AS SHE RUNS TOWARDS SHELTER. A ROUND HITS HER RIGHT THIGH AND SHE DUCKS BEHIND THE CORNER INTO AN ALLEY. TRYING TO AVOID TAKING FIRE, SHE TOSSES SEVERAL GRENADES, DESTROYING ANOTHER CAR. SHE RUNS THRU THE ALLEY TO THE OTHER STREET AND SHOOTS A MAN OFF HIS SUPER BIKE AND TAKES IT. AS SHE NEARS AN INTERSECTION THE REMAINING TWO POLICE CARS PULL IN FRONT OF HER. SHE MANAGES TO SHOOT ONE DRIVER IN THE CHEST BEFORE SLAMMING INTO THE OTHER CAR AND FLYING OVER THE HOOD. JUST THEN JOHN PULLS AROUND THE CORNER AND SHOOTS THE OTHER OFFICER WITH AN ISRAELI UZI. ROSE LEE CLIMBS ON THE BACK OF HIS BIKE AND THEY DRIVE OFF. BEFORE LEAVING THEY CIRCLE BACK AND ROSE LEE THROWS AN INCENDIARY BOMB ON THE CAR WITH THE REMAINING OFFICER INSIDE.

    “SO, HOW’D YOU END UP HERE?” SHE ASKS.

    “SAW YOU ABOUT A MILE BACK AND DECIDED I’D HELP.”

    “HOW’D THE BANK VAN GO?”

    “HAD TO ABORT. THE DRAGONS BEAT US THEIR”,

    “DAMNED” WITH LITTLE MORE CONVERSATION THEY HEAD BACK TO BASE.

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    ROSE FINALE pt.1 b

    LATER

    ROSE LEE SITS IN HER OVERSIZED CHAIR BACK IN THE COMMON ROOM. SHE WEARS SEVERAL BANDAGES COVERING HER WOUNDS. SHE LEANS BACK AND TAKES A LONG DRAG FROM HER CIGARETTE. JOHN ENTERS THE ROOM AND PLOPS DOWN IN A CHAIR BESIDE HERS.

    “THANKS FOR SAVIN’ ME BACK THEIR.”

    “YEAH, ABOUT THAT, WHY’D YOU TAKE THAT DETOUR ANYWAYS?”

    “JUST A MOMENT.” SHE GETS UP AND WALKS ACROSS THE ROOM TOWARDS A GROUP OF SOLDIERS HAVING A CONVERSATION.

    “REMEMBER LILITH?” ASKED ONE SOLDIER

    “YEAH, WHO COULD FORGET THAT WHORE.” REPLIED AN OTHER. THEY ALL BEGIN TALKING ABOUT VARIOUS EVENTS LILITH WAS A PART OF.

    ROSE LEE, FEELING THEY WEREN’T SHOWING RESPECT FOR HER DECEASED FRIEND, MADE A POINT OF PULLING OUT HER GUN AND SHOOTING ONE OF THE MEN IN THE HEAD BEFORE PUNCHING AND KICKING THE OTHERS. SHE THEN LEFT AND WENT TO HER QUARTERS TO SLEEP.

    THE NEXT MORNING


    ROSE LEE AWAKES TO A KNOCKING AT HER DOOR. SLIDING ON SOME OLD CAMO PANTS AND A BLACK SHIRT, SHE OPENS THE DOOR TO SEE JOHN WAITING FOR HER.

    “I WAS WERE HEADIN’ OUT AND THOUGHT YOU MIGHT WANT TO TAG ALONG.”

    “HEADIN’ OUT WHERE?”

    “JUST, OUT”

    “YEAH, SURE, WHY NOT?” SHE GRABS HER GUNS AND GOES TO JOIN HIM.

    THEY EACH GRAB A MOTORCYCLE, PUT ON THEIR HEADSETS SO THEY CAN TALK, AND HEAD OUT. AFTER ABOUT TEN MINUTES OF SWERVING THROUGH TRAFFIC AND TERRORIZING A GROUP OF TOURISTS, THEY SEE A COUPLE OF THEIR SOLDIERS STUMBLE OUT FROM AN ALLEY.

    “WHAT THEY HELL HAPPENED TO YOU?” ROSE LEE ASKS AS SHE PULLS UP.”

    ONLY ONE SOLDIER RESPONDS, THE OTHERS ARE IN TOO MUCH PAIN. “SORRY LORD GENERAL, WE WERE AMBUSHED.”

    “CAN THEY PLEASANTRIES,” SHE LOOKS AT HIS RANK, “SERGEANT, AND TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED.”

    “WE WERE AMBUSHED BY A BUNCH OF LETOSIAN BASTARDS. WE HELD ‘EM OFF AS LONG AS WE COULD. BUT THEY BROUGHT IN A COUPLE OF TANKS AND THAT WAS IT.”

    “ALRIGHT, JOHN, YOU CALL FOR ASSISTANCE. I’LL GIVE YOU THE COORDINATES WHEN I GET THERE. GENERAL, TAKE ME THERE AND GET YOU MEN TOGETHER. WE CAN’T FORMULATE A PLAN UNTIL WE KNOW ALL THE PLAYERS WE TO WORK WITH.”

    “YES MA’AM” THE GENERAL TOSSES HIS TROOPS SOME AMMO AND A RADIO AND GETS READY TO HEAD BACK”

    “SURE THING” JOHN GETS ON HIS RADIO AND TELLS THE OPERATOR TO WAIT FOR COORDINATES.

    THE GENERAL CLIMBS ON THE BACK OF ROSE LEE’S BIKE AND THEY HEAD TOWARDS THE FIGHT. ON THE WAY THERE THE GENERAL GIVES HER THE COORDINATES AND GETS THE REMAINING TROOPS TOGETHER.

    UPON ARRIVING AT THE SCENE ROSE LEE BEGINS GIVING THE TROOPS THEIR ORDERS. JOHN ARRIVES JUST IN TIME TO JOIN THE FIGHT. “SO, WHAT’S THE PLAN?”

    “STANDARD BLACK MAGE MANEUVER. THAT SHOULD HOLD ‘EM ‘TILL BACKUP ARRIVES. SPEAKING OF WHICH, WERE IS THE BACKUP.”

    “EN ROUT”

    “E.T.A?”

    “TEN MINUTES”

    “ALRIGHT, LET’S DO THIS THING!” SHE GRABS HER AK-M AND A FEW GRENADES AND HEADS OUT.

    SHE AND JOHN RUN TOWARDS A PILL BOX DODGING AND WEAVING ALONG THE WAY. JOHN HEADS LEFT AND SHE HEADS RIGHT. JOHN THROWS A DUMMY GRENADE TO SCARE OUT THE ENEMY TROOPS AND ROSE LEE MOWS THEM DOWN WITH HER TRUSTY AK-M. AS JOHN USES THE SEIZED HEAVY MACHINE TO PROVIDE COVER FIRE, ROSE LEE HEADS TOWARDS A COUPLE OF ENEMY TROOPS. TWO SOLDIERS JOIN HER HALFWAY THERE AND THEY EACH THROW A GRENADE BEFORE DROPPING IN AND UNLOADING THEIR GUNS. THE SOLDIER TO HER LEFT IS HIT IN THE CHEST AND SHE TAKES HIS WEAPONS AND AMMO.

    THEY BEGIN TAKING HEAVY FIRE FROM THREE JEEPS WHEN A ROCKET FLIES OVER THEIR HEADS AND DESTROYS THE CENTER ONE. TWO FRIENDLY TANKS DESTROY THE OTHERS. BACKUP HAS ARRIVED. USING THE TANKS AS COVER, ROSE LEE AND THE PRIVATE WHO JOINED HER SLOWLY MOVE TOWARDS AN ENEMY PILLBOX. THE TANKS DESTROY THE PILLBOX AND ROSE LEE FINISHES OFF THE SOLDIERS WHO CLIMB OUT. AN ENEMY ROCKET SENDS HER FLYING BACK AND DESTROYS ONE TANK. THE SOLDIER SHE WAS WITH IS KILLED IN THE BLAST. THE SECOND TANK IS HEAVILY DAMAGED AND THE CREW IS FORCED TO EVALUATE BEFORE ANOTHER ROCKET FINISHES THE JOB.

    JOHN HOPS ON BACK OF A JEEP AND MANS THE GUN. HE MOWS DOWN ENEMY SOLDIERS BEFORE BEING HIT IN THE CHEST AND KNOCK OFF. HE THROWS DOWN HIS DAMAGES ARMOR AND HIDES BEHIND A CORNER. HE QUICKLY PIECES TOGETHER A ROCKET LAUNCHER AND DESTROYS THE BUNKER THE SHOT CAME FROM. HE HEADS THROUGH A BACK DOOR INTO A TALL BUILDING TO GET A BETTER VANTAGE POINT. HE KILLS AN ENEMY SNIPER WHO WAS PICKING OFF SOLDIERS AND USES THE ROCKETS STORED IN A NEARBY ROOM TO PUNCH A HOLE IN THE ENEMY LINE. HE LEAPS OUT THE WINDOW INTO A NEARBY DUMPSTER JUST BEFORE A SWARM OF ROCKETS TAKES OUT SEVERAL FLOORS OF THE BUILDING.


    LATER

    HE COMES TO IN A SMALL HOSPITAL BED. ROSE LEE LIES IN A BED BEHIND HIM GETTING DRESSED.

    SHE LOOKS OVER AND SEES HIM. “WAKE UP SLEEPY HEAD. DON’T WORRY I JUST UP TOO. THE MEDIC SAYS WE WERE OUT FOR THREE WEEKS.”

    “YEAH, WELL I FEEL LIKE I NEED ANOTHER THREE WEEKS OF SLEEP TO RECOVER FROM THESE LAST FEW.” THE MEDIC CHECKS THEM BOTH AND THEY BOTH RETURN TO THEIR QUARTERS.

    SHORTLY AFTER LYING DOWN AND OPENING A BOTTLE OF ALCOHOL, PURE ALCOHOL, NOT BEER OR SOMETHING NORMAL, ROSE LEE RECEIVES A PHONE CALL. “HELLO, ROSE LEE, ARE YOU THEIR. I’VE GOT A PACKAGE FOR YOU, I THINK YOU’LL FIND IT LONG OVERDUE.”

    “WHAT? WHO ARE YOU?” SHE HEARS A CLICK ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE LINE AND A KNOCK AT THE DOOR.

    WHEN SHE ANSWERS THE DOOR SHE FINDS A SMALL BROWN PACKAGE WITH AN ENVELOPE ON TOP. SHE OPENS THE ENVELOPE FIRST AND FINDS A LETTER. AFTER READING IT SHE OPEN THE PACKAGE TO FIND A BUNDLE OF PHOTOGRAPHS. HER EYES TURN TO ANGRY STEEL AND SHE DROPS THE LETTER, IT READS:

    ROSE LEE:


    I RECENTLY ACQUIRED THESE PHOTOGRAPHS AND, KNOWING OF YOU PAST, THOUGHT YOU MIGHT BE INTERESTED. I BELIEVE THESE WILL ANSWER A FEW QUESTIONS.

    MAY YOU EMPIRE BE LARGE AND YOUR VICTORIES MANY,

    -YOUR PAL, ANOL

    SHE THROWS THE PICTURES ACROSS THE ROOM AND ONLY ONE LANDS FACE UP. IT SHOWS JOHN AS A YOUNG MAN, MEETING WITH THE MEN WHO KILLED ROSE LEES FATHER. THE NEWSPAPERS IN THE BACKGROUND ARE DATED A WEEK BEFORE THE MURDER.

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    • #3
      how do i add a poll?


      please rate from 1-10. ten is best

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      • #4
        CAPS ARE OVERRATED.
        Music and medicine, I'm living in a place where they overlap.

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        • #5
          probably fortgot caps lock was pushed.

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          • #6
            looked good in the original format. used copy paste.

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            • #7
              i don't know who you are, or why you keep stealing other peoples works from other boards and claiming them as your own, but i will not stand for it.


              go to : http://www.bakaneko.com/cgi-bin/ulti...&f=29&t=000366

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              • #8
                i have a feeling you two persons are the same.

                on the story some questions:
                why do the cops have no decent weapons if they are in the middle of the warzone?
                why are there tourists in the middle of a warzone?
                why is this future rambo with breasts?


                rating- 0.5
                where 100 is the best
                To all the virgins, Thanks for nothing
                brookus> my grandmother died when she heard people were using numbers in their names in online games.. it was too much for her little heart

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                • #9
                  there are no pictures...

                  -42 out of a scale of 10000000

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                  • #10
                    Gay
                    Originally posted by Diakka
                    Lets stop being lil bitches

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                    • #11
                      I'd rather listen to Paul Oakenfold songs for 800 hours than read that again.

                      That means it's really, really bad.
                      PLEASE, DON'T BE MISGUIDED...YA BITIN'. AND I'MA HAVE TA DIS YA, UNDERSTAND MISTA?

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                      • #12
                        Will someone summarize for me?
                        Dishonor is like the scar on a tree, which time, instead of healing, only helps to enlarge.

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                        • #13
                          more evidence that pearl jam is a sucker.

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                          • #14
                            Cause he read the whole thing?
                            Dishonor is like the scar on a tree, which time, instead of healing, only helps to enlarge.

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by Bluedandy
                              Cause he read the whole thing?
                              and cauz he likes green peas

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