Some poetry I've written

[gran guerrero]

Know your place in life is where you want to be
Dont let them tell you that you owe it all to me
Keep on looking forward, no use in looking round
Hold your head above the ground and they wont bring you
Down

Anthem of the heart and anthem of the mind
A funeral dirge for eyes gone blind
We marvel after those who sought
New wonders in the world, wonders in the world,
Wonders in the world they wrought

Live for yourself -- theres no one else
More worth living for
Begging hands and bleeding hearts will
Only cry out for more

Well, I know theyve always told you
Selfishness was wrong
Yet it was for me, not you, i
Came to write this song

capitalism gtfo

[Jerome Scuggs]

Know your place in life is where you want to be
Dont let them tell you that you owe it all to me
Keep on looking forward, no use in looking round
Hold your head above the ground and they wont bring you
Down

Anthem of the heart and anthem of the mind
A funeral dirge for eyes gone blind
We marvel after those who sought
New wonders in the world, wonders in the world,
Wonders in the world they wrought

Live for yourself -- theres no one else
More worth living for
Begging hands and bleeding hearts will
Only cry out for more

Well, I know theyve always told you
Selfishness was wrong
Yet it was for me, not you, i
Came to write this song

[gran guerrero]

Another one that I wrote.. I hope you don't mind me sharing too gran. I used to get into poetry quite often.

NO ONLY MY POETRY ALLORWD!!!

I kid I kid, I welcome it WPE, I liked Picture

[WorstPlayerEver]

Another one that I wrote.. I hope you don't mind me sharing too gran. I used to get into poetry quite often.



The Stream
_____________
The Wind Blows
Icy, Cold
Staring At The Face
Of An Empty Stream.
Confused By-
Apparent Warmth.
Twas a Dream.

Please...
Fill The Stream,
Let Warm Days
Truely Flow.
And Understand -Love-
In All Ways.
Till The Day I Go.

[Bioture]

It's ok.

[Fit of Rage]

no it was suppose to be contraction

It’s barbed
With teeth - making

It is barbed
With Teeth - making

the possessive works also, but it's works as well.

No, I meant the line:

"Winding and twining its’ mind"

[WorstPlayerEver]

I entered a poetry contest and actually had this one published....


Picture
__________
Above the mountains majesty,
there stood clouds; two or three.

And wrapped around
in brilliant glow
so still and sound
A Rainbow.

Through the mist; above, the sky,
Is blue, and brilliant, to the eye.

And the sun peeks through
the mountain tops
as the golden hue
on the field drops.

[gran guerrero]

I didn't read the freeverse because I don't care for that much.

I put more effort into the free verse, cause the sonnet was just something for lit. fair and I had a difficult time with it.

[gran guerrero]

The first its in Cyclos should have no apostrophe. Its (possessive) versus it's (it is, contraction).

no it was suppose to be contraction

It’s barbed
With teeth - making

It is barbed
With Teeth - making

the possessive works also, but it's works as well.

[Pearl Jam]

wiggity wiggity whack...i play xbox and then i dominate your mother in the sack

alas, mature wimmens be the best wimmens for the pickens, stated by charles dickens!

[Fit of Rage]

The first its in Cyclos should have no apostrophe. Its (possessive) versus it's (it is, contraction).

[cundor]

It's so dangerous to post your poems on TW forums

[Ignominy]

I didn't read the freeverse because I don't care for that much.

Working on using iambs (which would traditionally be used in sonnets, I think) will make your words flow much smoother -- which seems to be my main issue with these. "very jolly good" seriously made me wince. I'm not saying iambs are the end all be all, but if you pay attention to stress of syllables, then it'll make you a better writer, not only in poems with form, but in freeverse as well.

Also work on looking at a big picture for your pieces. Stick to an overall theme in form, and things will come off less awkwardly.

I used to write a long time ago, but I don't anymore, but I was ok at it when I did, it's just not entertaining.

[Pummel]

I like 'Cyclos'




yo mommas posting poetry ice newb

[IceStorm]

so
were posting poetry now