TW Artists part III: When mods attack (read the first post)

[PrOnEsSim]

Come Fall For Me
Carnage ( My Nickname)
Genre: Hip Hop/R&B/Rap (?)
Copyright 2006.
NOTES: most of the last verse is short, and some of the words are in urdu, my language.

[Dialouge]
Baby, sometimes, I wondered, what could I do for you to win my heart? how could you come fall for me?

I love Her (I love her)
But she dont know that
Oh my lady your like a beautiful rose
That i dont want to lose
You to another man
Because my dear your so kind, and sweet and so lovely
lady your in my heart
Till the day of my death
You'd make the darkness go away in my soul
You'd make my day with your shiny bright eyes
How could I ever told you those lies?
When I havent even talked to you
And besides I love Her
She keeps me warm inside
Baby your the one for me
Baby I love you
Come fall for me
Into my arms
Cause I love you my lady...

My lady my lady my lady my lady my lady my lady
My lady my lady my lady my lady my lady my lady (repeat)

For the first time that we talked
Your voices are keep repating in my head
I cant think straight
Is this fate
That has met us?
how come this love doesnt even exist
I cant seem to stop restisting
Your beautiful smile
And your laughter keeps me always on smiling
How could something be so beautiful & be forbidden?
I wont end up like Romeo And Juliet
Cause baby, this love, is meant to be
How could you not understand this?
Baby, I have a love disease for you
Can you just realize it?
And come fall for me

Muja pyaar kyaro
Muja dilh hai
To be with you
But you dont understand it
Come Fall for Me
[pyaar kyaro larki]

[DoTheFandango]

I'm proud of myself for that one.

[Scurvy]

sorry to drag out an old thread.
i've spent so fucking long on this with no end in sight, i'm desperate for some feedback. its due monday

[Noah]

Without giving us a setting, and a goal, theres not much to say. If it's an entry to chinese porn, it sucks at that. If it's a still image of a woman sleeping, then it's ok. :/

[Arsen]

if you're lucky you can catch me shredding on my guitar via Teamspeak - pz

[Pandagirl!]

I thought that was Squeezer in the picture... ahahah

[Nickname]

This Day Hath Been Long
Still Not Over, No End In Sight
I Enjoy Tasty Cake

Still the most valid haiku I ever wrote.

[Scurvy]

Without giving us a setting, and a goal, theres not much to say. If it's an entry to chinese porn, it sucks at that. If it's a still image of a woman sleeping, then it's ok. :/

its a rendering project. basically trying to get the drawing to look as much like the photo as possible. its boring as hell and driving me nuts.

[HeavenSent]

I like it a lot. However, the shading on the extended forearm looks like it was done in haste (or you were high) compared to the shading on the rest. i.e. the dress. Other wise, excellent work

[Jeenyuss]

looks good, right hand might need a bit more detail. it might help if you posted the original photo for reference.

[1ight]

sorry to drag out an old thread.
i've spent so fucking long on this with no end in sight, i'm desperate for some feedback. its due monday

Looks pretty good to me! Nice use of a pencil, skillfull! You don't happend to have the finnished project? Would be nice to see how it turned out, if you have finnished it yet.

[Cops]

Toronto Street Artist -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WYTSFxgyc88


2 minute bio on Joe Strummer -

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U1CShXEqyG0


Working on lots more, more to come for sure.

[Stylez]

Sorry, made two posts.

[Stylez]

Some graphics I've done on the side. I do 3D landscapes also, working on character models as well.

I'll post the ones that I have on deviantart. I've got more, but they're either on a disc somewhere or on my schools server.

[Stylez]

Here's a poem I wrote a long time ago. I've done more, but I really liked this one. Also I do a lot of banners for various websites. Some I've been sponsored for, but I also make free ones for people.

Suicidal Dreams

Do you ever think of your own existence, well take some time and drink on this for instance// Does your heart shatter at the thought of death, do you feel like your ready to breathe your last breath//
An attempt on your own life was the easy way out, when you could've just sat in a corner and screamed and shout// lifes decisions are hard to make, emotions are even harder to try and fake//
It's not very easy to see, even when it's right in front of you or even me// All you had to do was ask for some advice, but instead you went into the kitchen for the sharpest knife//
You use to hold me and tell me you didn't fear anything, now I stand and look at you and knowing you can't feel a damn thing// My heart is broken utterly in half, you'll forever be in our lonesome past//
Haunted by all your memories, remembering what I thought was our perfect chemistry// The only thing that was left when you were alive was our hope, now that you're gone the only thing left is this single line of rope//
Thinking taking my own life was best, all that ended up was putting my own body to rest// Now I see you a few feet away, your soul being tortured day after day//
Asking God for forgiveness, him coming down and telling me it's now none of his business// Knowing what I done was wrong, that is why I'm singing you this sad little song//
.... .. ...
... ... ....
... .. .. ... ..

When I awoke it was all a dream, you were still right there next to me// I grabbed you and held you oh so tight, started crying while you were looking at me all in fright//
Not knowing what was wrong, I just told you I loved you and will never ever do you wrong// For you're my special baby, your that one girl who drives me completely crazy//
Doesn't matter how many times we fight, as long as we always end up in the same place every night// Right next to you in my bed, knowing that I will always love you, even if you were dead.............