Need a little help with a paper I'm writing.

[Butt Hash]

allright, ty

[Xog]

http://www.geocities.com/epinephrine.rm/

1. Pre-History (December 1995 – October 1997)
Early History (October 1997 – November 1998)
The Dark Days (November 1998 – May 1999)
The Archaic Age (January 1999 – September 1999) – Backtracking a bit
The Renaissance (September 1999 – January 2000)
The Golden Age (February 2000 – December 2000)
The Modern Era (January 2001 – February 2002)
The Future (February 2002 - ?)

As Subspace player Epinephrine concisely puts it in her chronicle The History

i didn't know epi was a girl o_O

[Butt Hash]

hahahahaha see I knew it was a good idea to post this here

[RATTY...]

Can I ask which school level this text is supposed to be at? I'm hoping it's highschool and below.

[Butt Hash]

Can I ask which school level this text is supposed to be at? I'm hoping it's highschool and below.

Thank you for your constructive comment.

[RATTY...]

Thank you for your constructive comment.

It was.

1. If this is at university level, then it sucks.

2. If it isn't, then it doesn't really matter.

[Butt Hash]

Would all of you that are considering posting a reply here follow the example of Xog and reply with comments on the content of the text (dates names etc) rather than replyi with any other thoughts you have on the matter.

[genocidal]

i didn't know epi was a girl o_O

Epi is a hot and tight Asian woman with fuckin' on the mind.

[PaulOakenfold]

Would all of you that are considering posting a reply here follow the example of Xog and reply with comments on the content of the text (dates names etc) rather than replyi with any other thoughts you have on the matter.

fuck you faggot

[Singularity]

=.=

[Ardour]

I am team leader in public, loads. Put that in your history book. Even if its in white text at the end. Im so funny

[Fluffz]

I am the best SS player, you might mant to add that to your paper.

[RATTY...]

allright, ty

fuck you faggot, running away.

[Summa]

I read it. It was horrendous English....If this was for a case study as you said, that means it is a collegiate level writing assignment, and you have a long way to go. Also, much of it seemed inaccurate and irrelevant. I am not sure what your overall goal is and why you are using continuum as an example. Maybe for the degeneration of the English language through online gaming (which seems to have drastically effected you), or the brutally asshole online society it perpetuates (i.e. this thread), or how simple games can go on forever as long as you have big enough nerds around. Here's the point: what you wrote was essentially a crappy history, like worse than epi's. It was unsubstantial and seemingly false at points, plus in terrible English. I would suggest re-writing the entire thing, and actually making a point.

[gran guerrero]

I suggest just posting it on your blog and write about something else for your dissertation