Here it is: Subspace Commercial

[R>A>G>E]

I created this SubSpace Continuum "commercial" for the Ad-Campaign, feel free to leave comments/suggestions for the video(perhaps what should be added or what should be taken out).

REMEMBER: Watch the video as if you have NEVER played the game before.

Also: I will hopefully later be posting this in much higher quality for download if I can find a good host

I hope you enjoy it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aXqS2WCN2Xc

[Edify]

Hmm, seems nice. May I ask why you put the ships in a sepia tone and not their original colors?

[Purple Heart]

Who cares what tone

That shit is awesome

Nice job

[Ignominy]

Yes, good, thumbs up.
Though a bit long winded with the dramatic letters, these are the kind of ads we need. Ones that don't attract idiots.
I'd like to see more gameplay in place of the aforementioned dramatic letters.
But yes, good, thumbs up.

[Phizey]

Wow that was actually good.

[Hakaku]

That was actually a really good commercial. But if its meant for SubSpace in general, you failed. People need to know that there's more than one zone!

[Reaver]

Very Nice. Some more action on the end and it's good to go

[Shadowmere]

Heh that was pretty nice =) Good job.

[Kim]

Nicely done

[RaCka]

that was good.. noticed i was in it, thats what made it so good

[Shadowmere]

Racka I thought when I saw that you had replied to this post that you would have said:

"You forgot the 'EZ' from the end"

[Richard Creager]

sage

[Sarien]

It was nice.

Advice:

Duck the music a little more. It gets a little overpowering.

Ditch the Mario. That stuff be copyrighted.
Instead use that and a bit of extra time to show different zones.

Then you'll have a winner.

[winipcfg]

It was nice.

Advice:

Duck the music a little more. It gets a little overpowering.

Ditch the Mario. That stuff be copyrighted.
Instead use that and a bit of extra time to show different zones.

Then you'll have a winner.

Agreed.

I think there should be more focus on other zones (at least the most popular), if not nearly all of them.

But nice job.

[!cER]

Wow, that is a lot better than I expected to see, nice work. I don't see why there is a need to advertise other zones, I very much doubt people who saw that would even remember the name Trenchwars, it should just bring awareness of the game and what it is like to people who have never seen it before. The only thing in there that people might notice is the website at the end, and it can't look too cluttered.

Improvement wise I think I agree with pretty much what others have said, make the intro a little shorter (although having just watched it again it seemed fine) and show maybe a little more action. The length was pretty good imo. Also showing the vareity of the game with things like mario is a great idea.