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  • you want small and fractional that works with what you got

    I wrote this like 2 years ago

    Humming to our own beat
    Swaying to the sounds of our feet
    Wave, after wave, after wave…
    We push on
    With the sun rising from the horizon
    As our guiding light
    We keep on marching
    Thinking of our past
    Dreaming of our future
    The moving water reflects our faces
    Wave, after wave, after wave
    Our sad, but hopeful faces
    Keep marching along
    Straight into the sea
    Last edited by gran guerrero; 10-16-2009, 07:15 AM. Reason: Grammar police
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    All good things must come to an end.

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    • heh, that does seem to work with what i've got

      i like it

      i'm going to refrain from any further poetry posting while i'm at work

      didn't realize there's this huge meeting at the comm center and there are all these officials running around and stopping by

      just had the forums open and i quickly opened a new tab and brought up some weather

      sat there praying the county comissioner looking over my shoulder wouldn't notice the title of the other tab: "Mafia XVI: The City"
      jasonofabitch loves!!!!

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      • My friend and I write all of our facebook posts to each other in haiku. It's pretty intense.
        Pandagirl!

        (ph)>12 is just right

        In the most dangerous game...warping will only prolong your defeat. ?go warpwars -Chao <ER>
        1:Chao <ER>> what the FUCK?
        1:Chao <ER>> I just adverted and no one came
        1:Chao <ER>> at all
        1:Mantra-Slider> chao
        1:Mantra-Slider> you are in the wrong arena
        Panda <ZH>> ?find chao <ER>
        Chao <ER> - hero

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        • Fuck the apocalypse
          when the comet hits
          I'll be on a rocket-ship
          reading comic strips


          $$$ Both of yours were actually quite good. Better than I expected.

          See the back-hand compliment!? I'm a true-poet you can tell because I'm bitter.

          Edit: Gran G, I think you misspelled feet, either that or it's a reference to something you don't go back to later in the poem.

          And I'm pretty sure keeps should be changed to keep. I like the poem, I'm just a member of the grammar Gestapo.
          Last edited by Mattey; 10-16-2009, 01:44 AM.
          Mr 12 inch wonder

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          • On the same theme:

            Since sucking on your momma's tit
            life is shit, my style's curt like Vonnegut
            Mr 12 inch wonder

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            • just because the word play would be interesting, you should intentionally misspell curt with a k instead of a c.
              jasonofabitch loves!!!!

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              • Who posts at 3:50am?

                And I never misspell, whether it's on purpose or not!!
                Mr 12 inch wonder

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                • who posts at 3:52am?

                  i'm only posting because i'm stuck at work until seven. graveyard shift is so lonely.

                  edit: cold and lonely
                  jasonofabitch loves!!!!

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                  • Xog can u send a link to ur sig?
                    PUNCH SLOW WALKING PEOPLE IN THE BACK OF THE HEAD.

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                    • Your mouth is dry
                      And your eyes are red
                      Let out a dry heave and sigh
                      The world is your bed

                      The night before was fun
                      But the morning after
                      You’d like to avoid the sun
                      Whatever happened to the laughter?

                      Find me a trashcan
                      Feverish and stomach flu
                      Put my headache on for ban
                      My liver’s in pain too

                      We were giggling with numb
                      But the morning after
                      Makes me feel dumb
                      A place to vomit
                      Is all that really matters
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                      • J = Arnold "Poet" Jackson
                        Maybe God was the first suicide bomber and the Big Bang was his moment of Glory.

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                        • Originally posted by Sube View Post
                          Xog can u send a link to ur sig?
                          how would I send a link to my signature?

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                          • i want to go fishing, but i don't like boats

                            can i still catch something picture-worthy if i just stand on the shore of a lake?
                            can we please have a moment for silence for those who died from black on black violence

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                            • Originally posted by Xog View Post
                              how would I send a link to my signature?
                              Xog, that sig where the bloke goes crazy on the talk show? just send me a link to the site?

                              not hard?
                              PUNCH SLOW WALKING PEOPLE IN THE BACK OF THE HEAD.

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                              • Originally posted by Sube View Post
                                Xog, that sig where the bloke goes crazy on the talk show? just send me a link to the site?

                                not hard?
                                it's not a signature, that was my post :P

                                www.funnyjunk.com

                                and if you meant "img" instead of "sig" then now i understand

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